
Filip | 2 months ago | 6 comments | 6 likes | 223 views
PAT67, bambamD, Ilja and 3 others like this!
It needs some improvement may, ideas?


Really good, i like your primate Bix position and textures.
Maybe you could play with animated hands

vincent, 2 months ago
Thnx Vincent interesting thought. Maybe the hand layer with an different texture
Filip, 2 months ago
Your scene has 3 focal points: the baby, Bix and the text. Showing them all at the beginning creates confusion: the viewer does not know what to look at. I would introduce them one by one:
1) Baby
Zoom in on the baby, make him walking up the stairs. This creates curiosity: where is he walking to?
2) Bix
It is revealed where the stairs lead to: the great philosopher Bix!
3) Text
It is now revealed what this is all about: zoom in on the text: EMOTIONS!

michiel, 2 months ago
Thnx Michiel
Filip, 2 months ago
you can shift fx size of skybox, that will joint your landscape full, try.
Also moving fx left or right you got an scene with moving clouds

bambamD, 2 months ago